Updated Crash reporting and telemetry (markdown)

Crash-reporting-and-telemetry.md

@@ -7,8 +7,8 @@ Here is a list of all events, metrics and data being uploaded:
 * When the application starts
 * When user turns off telemetry
 * When navigating between sections of the application.
-* Various errors that are not caught in the application(Only the name and the sanitized stacktrace are uploaded)
-* When executing an action(Like cloning a tasks). The action name and the number of entities affected are tracked
+* Various errors that are not caught in the application (Only the name and the sanitized stack-trace are uploaded)
+* When executing an action (Like cloning a task). The action name and the number of entities affected are tracked
 
 Properties attached:
 * Computer OS
@@ -17,9 +17,9 @@ Properties attached:
 * Randomly generated session id
 * Randomly generated machine id
 # How to disable crash reporting and telemetry
-While Batch explorer is open on the title bar menu go to  `edit` > `Telemetry settings` > `Disable (restart required)`
+While Batch Explorer is running, on the title bar menu, go to  `edit` > `Telemetry settings` > `Disable (restart required)`
 
 ![image](https://user-images.githubusercontent.com/1031227/45703564-92751500-bb29-11e8-8e06-62908b2a7e98.png)
 
-**Important Notice:** This option requires a restart of Batch Explorer to take effect.(Changing will restart automatically)
+**Important Notice:** This option requires a restart of Batch Explorer to take effect. (Changing the setting will restart the application automatically)