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docs/editor/vscode-web.md

@@ -39,7 +39,7 @@ From your browser's search bar (aka omnibox), you can easily open any GitHub rep
 
 ![Type `code` in your browser and search a GitHub repository to open in vscode.dev](images/vscode-web/chrome-omnibox-extension.png)
 
-If you're already in VS Code for the Web at [https://vscode.dev](https://vscode.dev), you can alternatively navigate to different repos via the [Remote Repositories](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=ms-vscode.remote-repositories) extension commands. Select the remote indicator in the lower left of the Status bar, and you'll be presented with the **Open Remote Repository...** command.
+If you're already in VS Code for the Web at [https://vscode.dev](https://vscode.dev), you can alternatively navigate to different repos via the [Remote Repositories](https://marketplace.visualstudio.com/items?itemName=ms-vscode.remote-repositories) extension commands. Select the remote indicator in the lower left of the Status bar, and you'll be presented with the **Open Remote Repository...** command.
 
 ![GitHub Repositories](images/vscode-web/remote-repositories.png)
 

docs/sourcecontrol/github.md

@@ -193,7 +193,7 @@ One difference from working with a local repository is that when you commit a ch
 
 Another feature of the GitHub Repositories extension is that every time you open a repository or branch, you get the up-to-date sources available from GitHub. You don't need to remember to pull to refresh as you would with a local repository.
 
-The GitHub Repositories extension supports viewing and even committing LFS-tracked files without needing to install Git LFS locally. Simply add the file types you want tracked with LFS to a [`.gitattributes` file](https://git-lfs.com), then commit your changes directly to GitHub using the source control view.
+The GitHub Repositories extension supports viewing and even committing LFS-tracked files without needing to install [Git LFS](https://git-lfs.github.com) (Large File System) locally. Add the file types you want tracked with LFS to a [`.gitattributes` file](https://git-lfs.com), then commit your changes directly to GitHub using the Source Control view.
 
 ### Switching branches
 

docs/supporting/faq.md

@@ -272,9 +272,9 @@ When you open a folder, VS Code will search for typical project files to offer y
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-## Can I run VS Code on old Windows versions?
+## Can I run VS Code on older Windows versions?
 
-Microsoft ended support and is no longer providing security updates for [Windows 7](https://learn.microsoft.com/lifecycle/products/windows-7), [Windows 8 and Windows 8.1](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/lifecycle/announcements/windows-8-1-end-support-january-2023). VS Code desktop versions starting with 1.71 (August 2022) no longer run on Windows 7 and starting with 1.80 (June 2023) will no longer run on Windows 8 and 8.1. You will need to upgrade to a newer Windows version to use later versions of VS Code.
+Microsoft ended support and is no longer providing security updates for [Windows 7](https://learn.microsoft.com/lifecycle/products/windows-7), [Windows 8, and Windows 8.1](https://learn.microsoft.com/en-us/lifecycle/announcements/windows-8-1-end-support-january-2023). VS Code desktop versions starting with 1.71 (August 2022) no longer run on Windows 7 and starting with 1.80 (June 2023) will no longer run on Windows 8 and 8.1. You will need to upgrade to a newer Windows version to use later versions of VS Code.
 
 VS Code will no longer provide product updates or security fixes on old Windows versions. VS Code [version 1.70.3](https://code.visualstudio.com/updates/v1_70) is the last available release for Windows 7 users and version 1.79.1 will be the last available release for Windows 8 and 8.1 users. You can learn more about upgrading your Windows version at [support.microsoft.com](https://support.microsoft.com/windows/windows-7-support-ended-on-january-14-2020-b75d4580-2cc7-895a-2c9c-1466d9a53962).
 

release-notes/v1_70.md

@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ DownloadVersion: 1.70.2
 
 **Update 1.70.2**: The update addresses these [issues](https://github.com/microsoft/vscode/issues?q=is%3Aissue+milestone%3A%22July+2022+Recovery+2%22+is%3Aclosed).
 
-**Update 1.70.3**: This update is only available for Windows 7 users and is the [last release supporting Windows 7](https://code.visualstudio.com/docs/supporting/faq#_can-i-run-vs-code-on-windows-7).
+**Update 1.70.3**: This update is only available for Windows 7 users and is the [last release supporting Windows 7](https://code.visualstudio.com/docs/supporting/faq#_can-i-run-vs-code-on-older-windows-versions).
 
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