We didn't mean to sound disgruntled...

browser/README.html

@@ -64,19 +64,17 @@
   <h3>Q1. Why?</h3>
 
   <p>We want to have fun and build an excellent, user-friendly browser
-  without all the constraints (features, compatibility, marketing,
-  month long discussions, etc.) that afflict the current browser
-  development.</p>
+  without the constraints (such as unnecessary features,
+  compatibility, marketing requirements, month long discussions, etc.)
+  that the current browser development requires.</p>
 
   <h3>Q2. Why only a small team?</h3>
 
   <p>The size of the team working on the trunk is one of the many
-  reasons that development on the trunk is so slow and tedious.
-  Factors such as marketing teams, compatibility constraints, and
-  multiple UI designers pulling in different directions have plagued
-  the main Mozilla trunk development. We feel that fewer dependencies,
-  faster innovation, and more freedom to experiment will lead to a
-  better end product.</p>
+  reasons that development on the trunk is so slow. We feel that
+  fewer dependencies (no marketing constraints), faster innovation (no
+  UI committees), and more freedom to experiment (no backwards
+  compatability requirements) will lead to a better end product.</p>
 
   <h3>Q3. Where do I file bugs on this?</h3>