update with Eddie's comments now...

_data/round-5/projects.yml

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   - Oarabile Mudongo
 
 - name: "Activismo Lenguas: a online resource exchange for language digital activism"
-  description: "The project seeks to create a portal for peer learning and exchange for communities participating in an open and linguistically diverse web. Built upon the shared experiences of indigenous language digital activists in Latin America, the portal will document existing initiatives, resources to start a project what tools to use, and what strategies to follow to make your project of language digital activism sustainable. The project is a part of the Rising Voices initiative of Global Voices that seeks to create a portal for peer learning and exchange for communities participating in an open and linguistically diverse web."
+  description: "The project is a part of Rising Voices' indigenous language digital activism initiative that seeks to collaboratively create a portal for peer learning and exchange for and with indigenous communities participating in an open and linguistically diverse web. Built upon the shared experiences of indigenous language digital activists in Latin America, the portal will document existing initiatives, resources to start a project what tools to use, and what strategies to follow to make your project of language digital activism sustainable. "
   cohort: A
   lead:
   - Mónica Bonilla