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 					<h2>What is Test Pilot?</h2>
 					
-					<p>TTest Pilot was created to provide a new set of tools and capabilities to increase the efficiency and effectiveness of our user testing.  Test Pilot is a stand-alone platform.  Test Pilot may be used as an add-on to your web browser, or bundled into other products.  However Test Pilot is made available, you will always have to choose to participate in the program and unless you do so, no data will be collected by TestPilot.  You are in control. You choose to participate and you choose to share your data. No data will be collected unless you choose to do so. Please visit <a href="https://labs.mozilla.com/projects/test-pilot/">https://labs.mozilla.com/projects/test-pilot/</a> for more information on Test Pilot.</p>
+					<p>Test Pilot was created to provide a new set of tools and capabilities to increase the efficiency and effectiveness of our user testing.  Test Pilot is a stand-alone platform.  Test Pilot may be used as an add-on to your web browser, or bundled into other products.  However Test Pilot is made available, you will always have to choose to submit your data and unless you do so, no data will be transfered to Test Pilot server.  You are in control. You choose to participate and you choose to share your data. No data will be collected unless you choose to do so. Please visit <a href="https://labs.mozilla.com/projects/test-pilot/">https://labs.mozilla.com/projects/test-pilot/</a> for more information on Test Pilot.</p>
 					
 					<h2>Information Collected from Test Pilot Participants</h2>
 					
-					<p>In order to improve our user testing, Mozilla will collect certain data in relation to your participation in Test Pilot tests. Your data won't be transmitted until you download and sign into the Test Pilot program and then submit your data.  When your data is submitted, it will be aggregated into a big batch with everyone else's info and will not be directly connected back to you. All the aggregated data will be open to the public, but to be extra clear none of it will be personally identifiable as yours or anyone else's.</p>
-					<p>After you opt in to Test Pilot, you will have an opportunity to review a description of each test, including its duration and the types of data that will be collected through the test (the “Test Description”).  The data required for the test (“Test Data”) will be collected locally on your computer in a database within Firefox.  At the end of the test, you will be able to review the Test Data and will be asked whether you would like to submit the Test Data to Mozilla. </p> 
+					<p>In order to improve our user testing, Mozilla will collect certain data in relation to your participation in Test Pilot tests. Your data won't be transmitted until you choose to submit your data.  When your data is submitted, it will be aggregated into a big batch with everyone else's info and will not be directly connected back to you. All the aggregated data will be open to the public, but to be extra clear none of it will be personally identifiable as yours or anyone else's.</p>
+					<p>After you install Test Pilot, you will have an opportunity to review a description of each test, including its duration and the types of data that will be collected through the test (the “Test Description”).  The data required for the test (“Test Data”) will be collected locally on your computer in a database within Firefox.  At the end of the test, you will be able to review the Test Data and will be asked whether you would like to submit the Test Data to Mozilla. </p> 
 					<p>The Test Data consist of information that cannot be directly associated with a specific person or entity, and include your self-assessed technical level, computer configuration, the version of Firefox or other products that you use, the URL or Uniform Resource Locators (the addresses of web pages you navigate).  The Test Data do not include your name or email address, and will not be combined with any information that personally identifies you.</p>
 					<p>If you change your mind about participating in a test, you may opt out from the test at any time before you choose to share the Test Data, and the Test Data will not be transmitted to Mozilla.  Similarly, if you choose not to submit the Test Data at the end of the test, the Test Data will not be transmitted to Mozilla.</p>